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Some feathered haiku...

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silence
from the night sky
talons, then beak


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feathers
fluttering in the wind
of a passing car



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Just some random bird thoughts...
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Djoseph's avatar
Ouch. Poor birds.
I think they work well together. It's as if the feathers in the second one belongs to the victim of the bird in the first one.
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