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`
my half-full glass girl,
elegant crystal-optimistic stem
holding a vintage of surety
aged through persistent patience
in casks of expectations
I drink from her lips,
intoxicating sanguine
filling my blood with hope,
warm and sweet with smiles
of lavender
never empty of solace,
always ready to drunken me up again
should I sober to despair
`
my half-full glass girl,
elegant crystal-optimistic stem
holding a vintage of surety
aged through persistent patience
in casks of expectations
I drink from her lips,
intoxicating sanguine
filling my blood with hope,
warm and sweet with smiles
of lavender
never empty of solace,
always ready to drunken me up again
should I sober to despair
`
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You're good at this style of poetry aren't you and have obviously got some great inspiration
I think you've got just the right balance with this, and have managed to avoid the cloying sentimentality that romantic poetry sometimes breeds.
I think you've got just the right balance with this, and have managed to avoid the cloying sentimentality that romantic poetry sometimes breeds.