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Feb 1st
frowning moon
and a lone tear—
Venus rising
Feb 2nd
last night
a super soup
of fowl and steel!
Feb 3rd
rain, snow
rain, snow
only the groundhog knows
Feb 4th
many moons
many cats
both evade my grasp
Feb 5th
winter morning—
barely enough snow
to write about
Feb 6th
sixty degrees—
between blades of grass
the snowdrops huddle
Feb 7th
at the cabaret
a chilled spine—
winter moon
Feb 8th
blossomless—
a season teases
with a spring like day
Feb 9th
out of habit
I grab my coat—
Indian summer
Feb 10th
my cat
works off her food—
full moon
Feb 11th
no need for heat
this winter day
Feb 12th
a long day—
between the sheets
a short night
Feb 13th
at the beach
the sea foam resembles
fresh fallen snow
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Feb 1st
frowning moon
and a lone tear—
Venus rising
Feb 2nd
last night
a super soup
of fowl and steel!
Feb 3rd
rain, snow
rain, snow
only the groundhog knows
Feb 4th
many moons
many cats
both evade my grasp
Feb 5th
winter morning—
barely enough snow
to write about
Feb 6th
sixty degrees—
between blades of grass
the snowdrops huddle
Feb 7th
at the cabaret
a chilled spine—
winter moon
Feb 8th
blossomless—
a season teases
with a spring like day
Feb 9th
out of habit
I grab my coat—
Indian summer
Feb 10th
my cat
works off her food—
full moon
Feb 11th
no need for heat
this winter day
Feb 12th
a long day—
between the sheets
a short night
Feb 13th
at the beach
the sea foam resembles
fresh fallen snow
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Literature
HaikuWriMo Feb. 09
1.
even hotter,
summer fires
cut power
2.
fried eggs -
my bare feet on
concrete
3.
sun bleached sky,
clouds blend
seamlessly
4.
sailor's sky,
bloody sight -
warning? delight?
5.
open window,
wind blows summer
into air-cooler
6.
walk to school -
new shoes are
torture
7.
unfortunate spot,
cat asleep before
armchair
8.
walk-to-school track
after holidays
weeds
9.
seeing double
moon-image on
metal
10.
streelights
at war with
stars
11.
chocolate sky,
teeth gritty with
dust
12.
smoky haze,
bushfires across
the border
13.
glass shards -
rocks crowd
windowsill
14.
throbbing
an ant bite
travels
1
Literature
HaikuWriMo 2009, Feb 1-28
1
the cheshire cat's
grin-
crescent moon
2
serenading
from a rusted whirligig-
the last cricket
3
kite bones-
autumn still
in the trees
4
morning riot
bursting from the eaves-
pigeons!
5
holding my breath,
the warm air
of rain threatens
6
a man's hand
fingers curled in death-
dried leaves
7
thunderclap!
a cat panics
across the roof
night deluge-
come morning
shriveled worms
8
windows
shutting out the chill-
moonlight spills in
9
ice age-
my feet against his
10
after a downpour-
detour sign
pointing home
11
zen dawn-
ducks
contemplating puddles
12
frozen moon-
dogs cruise the street
in a wake
Literature
Winter Haikuwrimo 2009
-1-
damnable cold
plagues the weather
and my health
-2-
despite pouring rain
clinic's A/C is set to chill
what's up Doc?
-2(b)-
Federal Territory Day
K.L is a ghost town
except for tourists
-3-
boiling water
the teakettle and I
whistle a duet
-4-
while jogging
the cloudy sky breaks
a free bath!
-5-
at the clinic
halls are swamped with patients
dengue season
-6-
stray mutt
to whom does it howl
master, moon or mate?
-7-
cleaning your grave
pebbles split my nails
I remember your hands
-8-
waiting outside
for the moss rose's bloom
sunrise keeps me company
-9-
season finale
all questions to be answered...
pow
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What a great idea for a preview image! Again, a special thanks to extremely talented `jade-pandora and `RetroZombie for the stamp/preview image!
1 - ok, so every one is using the moon as a subject for their first haiku, so here is my take on it. This will probably end up as a tanka later on, but for now it's my haiku. I have another moon haiku too, more cheery, but I feel this more.
2 - Superbowl haiku!
3 - Groundhog's day
4 - Based of a comment I saw in the Lit forum.
5 - It snowed yesterday (finally) but it wasn't all that. This is similar to one I did in the fall.
6 - from 15F degrees to 64F in 2 days
7 - Out of town for the weekend
8 - a beautiful day in the middle of the winter.
9 - The warm weather continues.
1 - ok, so every one is using the moon as a subject for their first haiku, so here is my take on it. This will probably end up as a tanka later on, but for now it's my haiku. I have another moon haiku too, more cheery, but I feel this more.
2 - Superbowl haiku!
3 - Groundhog's day
4 - Based of a comment I saw in the Lit forum.
5 - It snowed yesterday (finally) but it wasn't all that. This is similar to one I did in the fall.
6 - from 15F degrees to 64F in 2 days
7 - Out of town for the weekend
8 - a beautiful day in the middle of the winter.
9 - The warm weather continues.
© 2009 - 2024 MSJames
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i hope that you are well, mike. just coming back to your winter wrimo entries and give you some of my thoughts, and to tell you that i have missed you.
day 1: we have quite a few observations of crescent moon and the star venus. it's certainly interesting to look at venus as a drop of tear. your month has started with a melancholic mood.
day 2: did you swallow the spoon?
day 3: i do not have to remind you i love this haiku, do i?
day 6: the first line immediately reminds me of math test papers with questions about geometry. that is quite unexpected and comical.
day 10: both the cat and the moon is full. lovely use of pun and you have suggested just the right word to connect the moon and the cat.
day 13: i can tell you are longing for more snow this winter and there isn't much. what a pity. i'm sure if there is more snow you can churn out even more lovely verses.
day 1: we have quite a few observations of crescent moon and the star venus. it's certainly interesting to look at venus as a drop of tear. your month has started with a melancholic mood.
day 2: did you swallow the spoon?
day 3: i do not have to remind you i love this haiku, do i?
day 6: the first line immediately reminds me of math test papers with questions about geometry. that is quite unexpected and comical.
day 10: both the cat and the moon is full. lovely use of pun and you have suggested just the right word to connect the moon and the cat.
day 13: i can tell you are longing for more snow this winter and there isn't much. what a pity. i'm sure if there is more snow you can churn out even more lovely verses.