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my haiku
shattered
- winter wind



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It is what it is...
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CrimsonThrenody Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010
Ah, a yet another wonderful little piece from you. It had been so long.

Well done!
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Tharrick Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, good to see more stuff from you :)
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MSJames Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
A more practical, and true to myself, edit...
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010   Writer
Elegantly and starkly expressed. I think I concur with the others about the 'is'.
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MSJames Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
Thanks! And the "is" is fixed!
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cmrlj Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
but would be better without the 'is' ...and perhaps in three lines then.
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MSJames Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
I concur with the "is" completely!
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moyanII Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i second that.
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MSJames Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
Fixed!
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